A question that comes up again and again while I am teaching Writers Write is whether or not a disease can be the antagonist. I don’t think so.
Claire steps into the lab. The door swooshes shut behind her. She misses slamming doors. That was what she needed for this. A door to slam. She meant business. The receptionist couldn’t stop her and these guys won’t stop her either.
The lab is cold. Her frail frame shudders and she wraps her arms around her skeletal ribcage. Today, she would give them a piece of her mind. She was over it. She marches up and puts both hands on the cold steel counter. She searches between the microscopes and test tubes. She spots her target.
“I am done with you.” She points her bony finger to drive the point home. “Seriously, this is over. I will not allow you to do this again.”
The tumour seems to glare at her in a malignant fashion. A small cluster of indignation as she dares question their presence in her body.
“Don’t look at me like that. I am warning you. I am going to nuke you and all your evil friends that are still in my body. I refuse to be taken by you. I will not be eaten alive by your cancerous filth. There is no place for your noxious influence in my life.”
She gets no response from the petri dish and shoves the table. The cells shake as she walks away. Yes, she told them, she told them good.
A bit odd, right? Yes, it is hard to fight a disease. I have heard of cancer patients naming their tumour, but even then it can’t talk back.
Who, then, is the antagonist?
First, ask yourself: ‘What is the protagonist’s goal?’ If she wants to be left to die in peace with the last bit of her dignity intact, the person trying to keep her alive is her antagonist. If she refuses to give up and wants to keep fighting, the doctor giving her no hope is the antagonist. Always keep in mind the antagonist does not have to be evil. They merely have to be in opposition to the protagonist. It can be an over-bearing spouse, a friend with unasked-for advice, a mother who refuses to let go.
If you were writing a story about people on an island with an erupting volcano, the volcano is not the antagonist. It is part of the setting that shapes the story. You could say a disease is similar in that it forms or dictates the setting. Your story will most likely take place in a hospital with lots of doctors. Or at a holistic retreat where patients are made to eat hand-picked leaves and raw honey. Regardless, there will be sick people, there will doctors or healers. This setting will shape your story and cause conflict.
Conflict is always both internal and external. Internally, it will be a spiritual, emotional and psychological battle. Externally, it will be the physical fight to live, but there must be physical conflict with other people. It does not have to be a fist fight, an argument will do.
Perhaps somewhere in the world is the one book that has been written to disprove this. If you have read it, please leave the name below. Otherwise take a look at The Fault in Our Stars by John Green or The Household Guide to Dying by Debra Adelaide for examples on how disease is simply part of the story. Happy writing.
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by Mia Botha