The CEO made the announcement.
The announcement was made by the CEO.
The announcement was made.
- Check sentence length. The longer your sentences are, the more likely you are to lapse into the passive voice. Reduce your sentence length. Split them, if necessary.
- Identify the subject. Who is the doer in the sentence? The subject should be first. Simply ask: who does what?
- Identify the verb. It’ll help you to identify the subject.
- Identify the object. If the sentence is passive the object will be first.
- Rewrite to follow the subject-verb-object order.
- What if there is no subject? At times, we do not know who did what. If there is no subject you might have to leave the sentence in the passive voice, but try to figure out who is responsible.
The report was written by Mr Jones.ACTIVE: Mr Jones wrote the report.The annual results were released by the auditors on the 23rd of June and the board was relieved when the markets rallied and the share price increased.ACTIVE: The auditors released the annual results on the 23rd of June. The markets rallied and the share price increased, much to the relief of the board.The line managers were instructed by the CEO to re-evaluate the evacuation protocols of the factory.ACTIVE: The CEO instructed the line managers to re-evaluate the evacuation protocols of the factory.
The Hemingway App will help to identify passive voice . You can also use readability statistics in Microsoft Word.
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by Mia Botha
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