7 Points To Consider When You Choose A Tense For Your Short Story

7 Points To Consider When You Choose A Tense For Your Short Story


Things can get very tense when you start talking about tense, with both sides (past and present) feeling equally strongly about their choice. For me, tense is almost instinctive. It’s not a conscious decision I make.

As with most writing-related things, you are what you read and I read a lot of novels in present tense. Therefore, I write in present tense – often.

But there is no right or wrong tense and I have written many stories in past tense. So how do you know which one is right for you? It depends on what you want to achieve.

Here are seven points to consider before you choose:

  1. Pace. Present tense is great for immediacy and speeding up your story. Past tense may slow it down. What will work for your story? What do you want to do?
  1. Genre. A few years ago, we had very strict dictates regarding genre. Romance and Crime were almost exclusively written in the past tense. Today, these dictates have become more like guidelines and we find more present tense writing in these genres. A lot of Young Adult is written in present tense.
  1. Your audience. Traditionally, most of our writing was in past tense. We grew up reading it and when we started writing this reflected in our work. As present tense became more and more popular we read more of it and wrote more stories in it. An older audience still prefers past tense, but Young Adult readers, who will grow up to read our stories, will perhaps be more inclined to present tense.
  1. Are you comfortable? Tense is not something to force. Write in the tense that is most comfortable for you. Look back at your stories and take note of the tense you are inclined to use. Also, try freewriting exercises. Set a timer and write. What tense do you use most often?
  1. Experiment. Even though you may be used to and comfortable with writing in a certain tense you should still experiment. Change the tense when you rewrite and see what happens to your story.
  1. Don’t mix it up. It’s only wrong when you use both in one piece, but you may be able to pull it off and defy all the rules by having a very good, brilliant literary reason for doing so. Until then, pick one tense and stick to it.
  1. Show, don’t tell. I usually start ‘telling’ when I write in past tense. I do deliberately use it for certain stories, but I know to double check that I ‘show’ enough.

Go back and look at your favourite stories, that you have read and written, and take note of the tense. Does it reflect in your writing?

Enjoy your stories and figure out what you like the most.

Happy writing.

 by Mia Botha

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